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Re: Dialogue corrections
« Reply #15 on: June 30, 2018, 04:52:07 pm »
Kernel call:

this turned out to be a great ideas
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Re: Dialogue corrections
« Reply #16 on: July 06, 2018, 08:30:07 pm »
Pizza call:

ambulances should delivery all pizzas

and it says unit 929-92 arriving, then when they patch themselves in, the number is 33-420. Aren't these normally the same?
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Re: Dialogue corrections
« Reply #17 on: July 13, 2018, 09:38:09 pm »
Mr. Buttercup call:

Unless they are veterinarians they wont be able to help my baby!

Is Mr. Buttercup alight??

He started scratching the young mans hands as he held on!
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Re: Dialogue corrections
« Reply #18 on: July 15, 2018, 04:45:15 pm »
SOS secure line:

I sent you to Jensen because I new he would teach you to hack
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Re: Dialogue corrections
« Reply #19 on: July 17, 2018, 09:02:45 pm »
if you say you don't know first aid in the snake call,
the caller still says first aid! Perfect!

And in the raging fire call:
"Or jump down with it." should have a question mark
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